SHORT FICTION STORY
Dear Reader:
Let me delve into my Creative Writing Archives – and pull out a story called “The Solution” I had written 6 years ago – in July 2011
Here is the story – duly abridged and revised – for you to read:
DIFFICULT PROBLEM – SIMPLE SOLUTION
Dear Reader:
Let me delve into my Creative Writing Archives – and pull out a story called “The Solution” I had written 6 years ago – in July 2011
Here is the story – duly abridged and revised – for you to read:
DIFFICULT PROBLEM – SIMPLE SOLUTION
Fiction Short Story
By
VIKRAM KARVE
Part 1 : THE ULTIMATUM
“I don’t know how I am going to solve this problem...” Anil said.
Yes – Anil indeed had a big problem on his hands.
The problem was his old father.
Anil’s father had dementia – and it was getting worse day by day.
“At first it was okay. We could manage somehow. He used to forget – or talk incoherently – or have mood swings – or he would get disoriented a bit and need help doing things – we all tried our best to look after him – my wife – my two kids – all of us did the best we could. But now – he is becoming impossible to handle...” Anil said.
“I know...” I said, “it must be very difficult for all of you – especially your wife.”
“All these years – my wife really cared for my father with love and devotion – as if he was her own father. She tolerates all his idiosyncrasies and she looks after his every need – she has to bathe him, dress him, feed him – even take him to the toilet. Even when he got aggressive with her – she managed to calm him down. But after this morning’s incident – my wife has given me an ultimatum.”
“Ultimatum...?” I asked.
Part 2 : THE PROBLEM
Dear Reader – before I continue the story – let me tell you what had happened that morning – and how this conversation with Anil began.
I had gone to Pune Railway Station in the morning to receive my daughter who was arriving from New Delhi by the Duronto Express.
I was walking towards the over-bridge – when I spotted Anil’s father wandering aimlessly on Platform No. 1 – from where the Deccan Queen to Mumbai was about to leave.
Suddenly – Anil’s father started walking towards the AC Coach – and he was about to board the Deccan Queen – when I stopped him.
I caught hold of his hand – and I pulled him aside – just in time – before the train began to move.
Anil’s father did not recognize me.
He tried to pull his hand free – and when I tightened my grip – he gestured towards the moving train – and he started incoherently muttering at me:
“Mumbai – Duty – Mumbai – Duty…”
Then – suddenly – Anil’s father got aggressive and he tried to violently break free.
So – I raised an alarm – and with the help of some people – we overpowered him.
Once he was overpowered – Anil’s father collapsed and he started weeping like a child.
I called up Anil – who rushed to the railway station – and we had to literally carry Anil’s father to the car.
Suddenly the old man’s condition worsened – and it looked like he was having a seizure – so we rushed him to hospital – where they admitted Anil’s father into the ICU to keep him under observation.
We sat outside the ICU.
I felt sad for Anil and his father.
Anil and I were “Railway Children” – who had grown up together in those typical Railway Townships which adorn big railway junctions all over India
Our fathers – both were Special Class Railway Apprentices from the same batch of SCRA – they were close friends – and – we luckily had many postings in the same places – so Anil and I became close friends too.
After school – we – Anil and I – we both went to IIT – and now – both of us lived and worked in Pune.
I felt sad for Anil’s father.
In the prime of his life – as a distinguished Railway Officer – he had such a regal persona and a commanding personality – and now – dementia had reduced him to this misery in his old age.
Part 3 : THE SOLUTION
Anil’s father lies sedated in the ICU.
Soon our wives – a few colleagues – and a few friends arrive.
We all stand in balcony outside the ICU of the hospital – brainstorming to find a solution to the problem.
“I cannot handle him anymore,” Anil’s wife says, “ever since Anil’s father got this dementia – the last few years have been hell for me. Anil goes out to work – the children go to school – but I have to live with Anil’s father all the time. I have to do everything – I have to suffer his tantrums – I have to even clean his shit – and now he does this – he just runs away from home and he gets lost. I can’t take it anymore – I will go crazy.”
“She needs a break,” my wife says to Anil, “why don’t you send your father to your sister’s place for a few days?”
“His sister?” Anil’s wife says mockingly, “as long as her father was fine she was the “doting daughter. Anil’s sister ensured that she got her share in her father’s property. Now that her father is sick – Anil’s sister is shirking her responsibility – and she has washed her hands off him. The last time she visited us I asked her to take her father to her house in Mumbai for a few days – so that we could get some respite – and do you know what Anil’s sister’s husband said?”
“What?” my wife asks.
Anil’s wife says angrily:
“Do you know what Anil’s sister’s husband said...? That selfish brother-in-law of mine said that “he did not want an insane man in his house” as it would affect his children and their studies.”
“Really...?”
“Yes – he said that. So – I asked my brother-in-law:
“What about our children...? Tell me – if it is not okay for you to have an “insane” man in your house – how is okay for us to have the same “insane” man in our house...?”
After hearing this – he and Anil’s sister just kept quiet. And since that day – they haven’t shown up. I hate Anil’s sister. She just pays “lip service”. All she does is call up once in a while – and then she tells the whole world how concerned she is about her father...”
“That’s really very sad – but even today – it is the sons who are expected to look after their parents – especially the eldest son...” says a colleague of Anil – who has come to the hospital.
And then – the colleague asks Anil:
“You also have a brother – don’t you...?”
“He is abroad – in America...
“That’s the best thing to do – escape abroad to a good life in America
“Longevity is increasing – and these old people are becoming a big problem. In our colony almost everyone’s kids are in America
“Don’t worry, Sir. At least your father is not as bad as my neighbour. The poor man’s brain cells are dying – and he is lying like a vegetable for the last 6 months with tubes inserted to feed him and take his stuff out...” a young girl says – she is a recently joined software engineer – and she tries to console Anil.
The girl thinks that if she tells Anil of someone with a greater misfortune – maybe he will feel some consolation.
But unfortunately – it has the opposite effect – and Anil asks her:
“Did he have dementia...? Will my father also become a vegetable...?”
“No – you don’t worry – nothing of that sort will happen. Your Dad will be okay...” I say – putting my hand on Anil’s shoulder.
“But we can’t keep your father at home in this condition. I cannot bear it any longer. I will just collapse one day. And now he has started getting aggressive. I am afraid of him – I will feel scared if he is at home...” Anil’s wife says.
“Why can’t we keep Anil’s father in hospital?” my wife asks.
“We can’t keep him in this hospital forever,” I say.
“Not this hospital.”
“Then which hospital...?”
“An institution. Where they can treat his mental problems.”
“A mental hospital...? You want me to put my father into a lunatic asylum...? My father is not a lunatic – he has not gone mad. Poor fellow has just got dementia – for which there is no cure...” Anil says angrily to my wife.
“Cool down Anil...” I say, “my wife did not mean to hurt you.”
My wife apologizes to Anil.
We sit quietly till the Intensivist calls us – and the Doctor says:
“He has stabilized now. All parameters are okay. We will move him to a special room later at night and keep him under observation. You can go home and relax now. We will look after him. You can take him home tomorrow morning.”
“You all go home...” Anil says, “I will stay with him in hospital and bring him home in the morning.”
“No...” Anil’s wife says, “I don’t want your father to come home in this condition. I am frightened of him. Suppose he gets violent or something...? Or he disappears again and he gets lost...? You will blame me. I cannot look after your father anymore. No. Please don’t bring him home. You arrange something…”
On hearing the comments of Anil’s wife – the Intensivist looks at her in a perplexed manner – so I gesture to him that “all is well” – and – I say to Anil:
“Okay Anil – you stay here in hospital – and we will all go home and think of some solution.”
On our way home – we pick up Anil’s kids – and take all of them to our place.
Anil’s wife sleeps in our bedroom with my wife.
All the kids sleep in their children’s bedroom.
I lie down on the sofa in the living room.
I try to think of a solution to Anil’s problem.
The ring of my mobile phone jolts me out my sleep.
It is Anil.
Anil’s voice sounds strange, shaky, as he cries incoherently:
“The problem has been solved – the problem has been solved – My Father is Dead…”
“What...?” I say, stunned.
“Yes – my father is dead – while they were shifting him from the ICU to the ward on a stretcher – he got violent – so violent – that the stretcher tumbled – he fell on head – he broke his neck – and he died on the spot...” Anil says, sobbing.
“Oh My God...” I say.
I can still hear Anil sobbing:
“Poor man. He must have heard us. So – he solved the problem – he solved his own problem – he solved our problem – he solved everyone’s problem…”
Anil stops speaking – and there is silence.
I keep the mobile phone pressed to my ears.
Then – all of a sudden – I can hear Anil break down into tears.
VIKRAM KARVE
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