MY FIRST LOVE STORY
RENDEZVOUS AT SUNRISE
By
VIKRAM KARVE
Dear Reader:
Your first love always has an enduring place in your heart.
It is the same with your first creative work - your first creative baby always has a special significance.
This is the first short story I wrote. It is a simple love story.
I wrote this story 24 years ago during my Vizag days after a visit to the Morning Sunday Market.
I kept this story with me in my diary for some time.
Then, one day, I sent it for consideration for publication in the literary supplement of a newspaper and to my delight this story was published that very weekend.
Yes, this was my first published work of Fiction, my first Creative Baby.
I love this story - Rendezvous at Sunrise.
Do read the story and tell me if you liked it.
Rendezvous at Sunrise
A Love Story
By
Vikram Karve
Sunrise, on the eastern coast, is a special event.
I stood at Dolphin’s Nose, a spur jutting out in to the Bay of Bengal, to behold the breaking of the sun’s upper limb over the horizon of the sea.
As the eastern sky started unfolding like crimson petals of a gigantic flower, I was overcome by a wave of romance and nostalgia – vivid memories, not diminished by the fact that almost ten years had passed.
I stood at Dolphin’s Nose, a spur jutting out in to the Bay of Bengal, to behold the breaking of the sun’s upper limb over the horizon of the sea.
As the eastern sky started unfolding like crimson petals of a gigantic flower, I was overcome by a wave of romance and nostalgia – vivid memories, not diminished by the fact that almost ten years had passed.
I was a young bachelor then, and Vizag (Visakhapatnam) did not have much to offer.
Every Sunday morning, I used to rise before dawn and head for Dolphin’s Nose to enjoy the resplendent spectacle of sun majestically rising out of the sea.
The fresh salty sea breeze was a panacea for all the effects of the hangover caused by Saturday night excesses.
The fresh salty sea breeze was a panacea for all the effects of the hangover caused by Saturday night excesses.
After the viewing the metamorphosis at sunrise, I used to walk downhill along the steep mountain-path towards the rocky beach for a brief swim.
I used to notice a flurry of activity at a distance, in the compound of a decrepit building, which I used to ignore, but curious, one day I decided to have a closer look.
I used to notice a flurry of activity at a distance, in the compound of a decrepit building, which I used to ignore, but curious, one day I decided to have a closer look.
It was a fish market.
Most of the customers were housewives from the nearby residential complexes who were in their “Sunday-worst” – sans make-up, slovenly dressed, face unwashed and unkempt hair – what a contrast from their carefully decked-up appearances at the club the previous evening.
I began to walk away, quite dejected, when I first saw her.
I stopped in my tracks.
She was a real beauty – tall, fair and freshly bathed, her long lustrous hair dancing on her shoulders.
I stopped in my tracks.
She was a real beauty – tall, fair and freshly bathed, her long lustrous hair dancing on her shoulders.
She had large expressive brown eyes and her sharp features were accentuated by the rays of the morning Sun.
I cannot begin to describe the sensation she evoked in me but it was the first time in my life that I felt my heart ache with intense yearning.
I cannot begin to describe the sensation she evoked in me but it was the first time in my life that I felt my heart ache with intense yearning.
I knew this was love.
But I knew in my heart that I stood no chance – she had a mangalsutra around her neck.
She was married – maybe happily too.
Nevertheless I went close to her and made her pretense of buying some fish.
Nevertheless I went close to her and made her pretense of buying some fish.
Smiling cannily at me she selected a couple of pomfrets and held them out to me.
I managed to briefly touch her soft hands – the feeling was electric and a shiver of thrill passed through me.
She communicated an unspoken good-bye with her teasing dancing eyes and briskly walked away.
I managed to briefly touch her soft hands – the feeling was electric and a shiver of thrill passed through me.
She communicated an unspoken good-bye with her teasing dancing eyes and briskly walked away.
I was too delightfully dazed to follow her.
I returned to my room and had fried pomfret for breakfast. Needless to say they were delicious.
I religiously followed this routine every Sunday morning.
She never missed her rendezvous with me – same place, same time, at precisely Seven o’clock in the morning.
She never missed her rendezvous with me – same place, same time, at precisely Seven o’clock in the morning.
But not a word was exchanged between us.
I was too shy and she probably wanted to keep it this way – a beautiful ethereal relationship – a love so delicate that one wrong move might destroy everything.
I was too shy and she probably wanted to keep it this way – a beautiful ethereal relationship – a love so delicate that one wrong move might destroy everything.
Meanwhile, I have developed a taste for fried pomfret – quite creditable, considering that I had never eaten fish before.
I left Vizag and traveled around the world, met so many beautiful girls in the numerous exotic places I visited, but I never forgot her.
A man’s first love always has an enduring place in his heart.
A man’s first love always has an enduring place in his heart.
And now I was back in Vizag almost ten years later.
As I walked down the slope towards the beach, in my mind’s eye I could still vividly visualize the playfully sublime look on her face - her gentle smile and communicative eyes – although ten years had passed.
I could not contain the mounting excitement and anticipation in me. I was desperately yearning to see her again. It was a forlorn hope but I was flushed with optimism.
As I walked down the slope towards the beach, in my mind’s eye I could still vividly visualize the playfully sublime look on her face - her gentle smile and communicative eyes – although ten years had passed.
I could not contain the mounting excitement and anticipation in me. I was desperately yearning to see her again. It was a forlorn hope but I was flushed with optimism.
As I reached the beach I noticed that the Sun was well clear of the horizon.
I glanced at my watch. It was almost Seven O’clock.
I hastened my step – almost broke in to a run – and reached the fish market and stood exactly at the same spot where we used to have our rendezvous at sunrise.
I glanced at my watch. It was almost Seven O’clock.
I hastened my step – almost broke in to a run – and reached the fish market and stood exactly at the same spot where we used to have our rendezvous at sunrise.
With tremors of anticipation, almost trepidation, I looked around with searching eyes.
Nothing had changed. The scene was exactly the same as I had left it ten years ago.
Only one thing was missing - she wasn’t there.
I had drawn a blank.
I was crestfallen.
Nothing had changed. The scene was exactly the same as I had left it ten years ago.
Only one thing was missing - she wasn’t there.
I had drawn a blank.
I was crestfallen.
My mind went blank and I was standing vacuously when suddenly I felt that familiar electrifying touch, the same shiver of thrill.
It shook me to reality, as quick as lighting.
She softly put two promfret fish in my hands.
It shook me to reality, as quick as lighting.
She softly put two promfret fish in my hands.
I was in seventh heaven.
I looked at her.
I was not disappointed.
Her beauty had enhanced with age.
But something had changed.
Her beauty had enhanced with age.
But something had changed.
Yes, it was in her eyes.
Her large brown eyes did not teasingly dance anymore.
Her large brown eyes did not teasingly dance anymore.
There was a trace of sadness, a tender poignancy in her liquid brown eyes as she bid me an unspoken goodbye.
I was so dumbstruck by the suddenness of the event, and the enormity of the moment, that I stood frozen, like a statue, unable to react or to say anything.
I was so dumbstruck by the suddenness of the event, and the enormity of the moment, that I stood frozen, like a statue, unable to react or to say anything.
It was only as she was leaving that I noticed that there was no mangalsutra around her slender neck.
VIKRAM KARVE
Copyright © Vikram Karve 2013
Vikram Karve has asserted his right under the Copyright, Designs and Patents Act 1988 to be identified as the author of this work.
© vikram karve., all rights reserved.
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A creative person with a zest for life, Vikram Karve is a retired Naval Officer turned full time writer and blogger. Educated at IIT Delhi, IIT (BHU) Varanasi, The Lawrence School Lovedale and Bishops School Pune, Vikram has published two books: COCKTAIL a collection of fiction short stories about relationships (2011) and APPETITE FOR A STROLL a book of Foodie Adventures (2008) and is currently working on his novel and a book of vignettes and an anthology of short fiction. An avid blogger, he has written a number of fiction short stories and creative non-fiction articles on a variety of topics including food, travel, philosophy, academics, technology, management, health, pet parenting, teaching stories and self help in magazines and published a large number of professional and academic research papers in journals and edited in-house journals and magazines for many years, before the advent of blogging. Vikram has taught at a University as a Professor for 15 years and now teaches as a visiting faculty and devotes most of his time to creative writing and blogging. Vikram Karve lives in Pune India with his family and muse - his pet dog Sherry with whom he takes long walks thinking creative thoughts.
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Email: vikramkarve@hotmail.com
AMAZON
http://www.amazon.com/dp/B005MGERZ6
SMASHWORDS
http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/87925
Foodie Book: Appetite for a Stroll
If your are a Foodie I am sure that you will like my book of Food Adventures APPETITE FOR A STROLL. Do order a copy from FLIPKART:
http://www.flipkart.com/appetite-stroll-vikram-karve/8190690094-gw23f9
About Vikram Karve
A creative person with a zest for life, Vikram Karve is a retired Naval Officer turned full time writer and blogger. Educated at IIT Delhi, IIT (BHU) Varanasi, The Lawrence School Lovedale and Bishops School Pune, Vikram has published two books: COCKTAIL a collection of fiction short stories about relationships (2011) and APPETITE FOR A STROLL a book of Foodie Adventures (2008) and is currently working on his novel and a book of vignettes and an anthology of short fiction. An avid blogger, he has written a number of fiction short stories and creative non-fiction articles on a variety of topics including food, travel, philosophy, academics, technology, management, health, pet parenting, teaching stories and self help in magazines and published a large number of professional and academic research papers in journals and edited in-house journals and magazines for many years, before the advent of blogging. Vikram has taught at a University as a Professor for 15 years and now teaches as a visiting faculty and devotes most of his time to creative writing and blogging. Vikram Karve lives in Pune India with his family and muse - his pet dog Sherry with whom he takes long walks thinking creative thoughts.
Vikram Karve Academic and Creative Writing Journal: http://karvediat.blogspot.com
Professional Profile Vikram Karve: http://www.linkedin.com/in/karve
Vikram Karve Facebook Page: https://www.facebook.com/vikramkarve
Vikram Karve Creative Writing Blog: http://vikramkarve.sulekha.com/blog/posts.htm
Email: vikramkarve@hotmail.com
© vikram karve., all rights reserved.
4 comments:
sir,
why did she always give you promfret,was she a fisher-woman?
Preetha:
You floored me with your sense of humour...!!! LOL
No, this beauty wasn't a fisherwoman - she picked up the pomfret and gave it to me.
BTW - Did you like the story?
Interesting *likes*
First love is always endearing. Did you put mangalsutra around her slender neck after 10 years??
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