Wednesday, July 4, 2012

ZAN ZAR ZAMEEN


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ZAN ZAR ZAMEEN
Short Fiction – A Murder Story
By
VIKRAM KARVE

Har qatl di e jar zan zar zameen
(The motive for every murder is because of woman, money or land)

“A man dies in suspicious circumstances. You arrest another man for his murder.  Then the murder-suspect dies in the lock-up. And you close the case,” Rita says.

“That’s what happened,” I say.

“Well, the higher-ups are not happy with your closure report,” she says matter-of-factly, “they feel you should have delved more deeply, investigated the case a bit more thoroughly.”

“It is an open and shut case. What is there left to investigate? And, Rita, you were there yourself when all this happened.”

“I know. But the guys who died were top officers – influential men. The powers-that-be are concerned. The boss wants me to go over the case once more with you before he approves the closure report.”

I say nothing, remain silent.

“Sir, I know I am one batch junior to you and that you have independent charge, so if you feel …”

“No. No. It’s not that…” I say hurriedly, “it’s okay. I have no problem. After all you are head of the crime branch in headquarters.”

“And I am tipped to take over from you.”

“You? You’re going to take over from me? Where am I going?”

“Don’t you know? Well, I am not supposed to tell you, but once this is all over, most likely you’re heading for a coveted foreign assignment.”

“I’m going abroad?”

“That’s what the boss told me, in strictest confidence,” Rita says, “he told me to discuss the case with you and satisfy myself and the moment I submitted my report, he would close this pending case and relieve you so that you can hand over your duties to me and fly off across the seas.”

“Thanks for the good news. Let’s get this over with fast. Tell me, how should we go about it?”

“Sir, just tell me what happened. I’ll take your word for it.”

“The murder happened on Barren Island. As the name indicates, it is indeed a  desolate uninhabited island. There’s nothing over there. Except the volcano – that’s what these guys had ostensibly come to see. There is the barren island, the volcano, the springs, the lovely beach and the site office-cum-guesthouse which we activate for such VIP visits – bloody work-cum-pleasure trips, having a good time under the pretext of work.”

“Your report says that there were only six people on Barren Island on that fateful night.”

“That’s right – you know it.  Joshi, the chief scientist who was murdered was in Room No. 1 and his deputy Sharma, the murderer, was next door in Room No. 2. You, the liaison officer, were in Room no. 3. The technocrat couple Mr. and Mrs. Krishnan were in Room No. 4. And I, the camp in-charge, was in Room No. 5 – that’s all.”

“No one else? Guest House Staff? Cooks? Security staff? Boat crew?”

“I sent them back to Port Blair and told them to come in the morning. We wanted some privacy, a cosy party all by ourselves on the beach. Besides I wanted the staff to enjoy their New Year’s Eve with their families. Come on, Rita, you know all that. You were there yourself.”

“Just checking,” she says, “and when did you all turn in?”

“Well, the Krishnan’s were the first to go to bed, immediately after midnight – they were quite drunk, both of them. And then you left, saying you were tired and wanted to get up early in the morning.”

“And then?”

“We drank for an hour or so – and I was feeling quite high, so I came back to the guest house and went to sleep – but the two scientists kept on drinking – in fact, when I asked them to come with me, I remember them saying that they wanted to lie down on the beach and drink till sunrise.”

“And next morning, Joshi’s body is found floating in the sea.”

“Yes. The body had strangulation marks around the neck.”  

“So you carry out an investigation and arrest Sharma on charges of murder.”

“I had a post mortem done in Port Blair. The time of death was around 3 AM.”

“So?”

“You were in your room, the Krishnan’s were in their room, I was in my room – only Sharma was with Joshi on the beach. Sharma had no alibi. Among all of us, Sharma was the only one without an alibi.”

“Did you ask him where he was? Did you try and interrogate him? Did you try and get a confession?”

“Sharma just kept mum like a zombie. He did not answer anything – he refused to give a statement. That’s why I …”

“That’s why you gave him Sodium Pentothal. Sir, you know you can’t do this on your own – you have to take the court’s permission.”

“A wee bit of truth serum never hurt anyone…”

“But he died.”

“I didn’t know Sharma would react this way. I thought he was a tough cookie. I’d watched him trek, swim, climb the steep slope of the volcano. You should have seen the way he was drinking and eating at the party,” I say, “and I wanted to get to the bottom of this case – I wanted to find out the motive behind the murder.”

“Motive? Your Zan Zar Zameen theory, Sir?” Rita asked with a grimace on her face.

“It was a case of Zan – a woman.”

Zan?” Rita says, looking quite astonished.

“Yes. I got a lead. Don’t ask me how?”

“Your batch-mate, in Delhi…”

“Maybe. But that is not important. What is important is that Joshi was Sharma’s direct boss and that Sharma was having a affair with Joshi’s wife.”

“So he murdered him? But why?”

“That’s what I was trying to find out with a bit of truth serum but the bugger collapsed and died.”

“Well I don’t know about the motive but I can say with surety that Sharma did not kill Joshi.”

“Then who murdered Joshi?”

“I don’t know,” Rita says, “you said that you arrested Sharma because he was the only one without an alibi. But actually Sharma had a cast iron alibi.”

“What?”

“Let’s go through it once again,” Rita says looking into my eyes, “the Krishnan’s leave the party just after midnight, I leave shortly afterwards – I remember the exact time – I clearly remember looking at my watch and the wall clock – I reached my room at 12:30. Tell me, do you remember the exact time you left the beach and returned to your room?”

“I told you I was quite high and don’t remember exactly. We drank for an hour or so. So maybe I came back to my room at around 1 o’clock or maybe 1:30 or at the most 2.”

“You are wrong. Sharma came back at 1 o’clock, not you.”

“What?”

“I told you that Sharma had a cast iron alibi. Sharma came to my room at 1 o’clock. He was with me in my room the whole night. In bed. Making love to me. Then he went to his room at 5 in the morning, just as the sun was rising, before everyone got up, and the boat ferrying the staff came at 6 o’clock, and they discovered Joshi’s dead body floating in the sea, ” Rita says.

Then she looks at me and asks me, “do you understand what I am saying?”

“You are implying that I murdered Joshi,” I say, my heartbeat rising.

Rita does not say anything, but she looks at me with a strange expression, a look of scorn combined with pity.

I look at Rita and say, “But tell me, why should I murder Joshi, what is my motive?”

“Well, I don’t know,” she says, “but now the onus is on you to prove your innocence.”


VIKRAM KARVE
Copyright © Vikram Karve 2012
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31 comments:

Uma Anandane said...

Ah! a gripping story ..and I was so curious to find the ending of who did the murder and why.But, the onus still lay.Maybe you should have ended with so and so reasons would have given a complete story.
Overall,a thrilling one !

Vikram Waman Karve said...

Hi Uma,
I agree with you that maybe a complete resolution may have been more satisfying, but then the IBL Competition for which I wrote this story specified an open ending.
Thanks for your nice words.
I am glad you liked the story.
Do read my blog and comment - I will look forward to your feedback.
Regards
Vikram

Captain Awesome said...

Well, I liked the end too much. Till the last line, there was no clue who is being accused for murder :) Superb sir

Hemant said...

Nice story sir..and especially the end....we had no clue what was happening and how it is gonna end...completely unpredictable....

Nan said...

Very well narrated story! The suspense was all the way kept gripped till the end. All the best Sir! :)

Vikas Khair said...

Really wonderful story with the term "Hunter became Hunted" totally justified. All The Best for IBL

Vikas khair
vikaskhair.blogspot.com

Anonymous said...

I liked it that the accused had no idea about what was coming. In fact, had I not known the sub-topic, I would have been in for a huge twist at the end. Good one, sir!

Best wishes from Kolkata Knight Writers. :)

Vikram Waman Karve said...

Hi Sudeshna,
Thank you for your nice words and wishes.
I am glad you liked the story.
All the Best
Regards
Vikram

Vikram Waman Karve said...

Thanks Captain Awesome. I am glad you liked the story.

Vikram Waman Karve said...

Hi Vikas,
Thanks for your nice words and wishes
Vikram

Vikram Waman Karve said...

@ Nandini - Thanks for your wishes. I am glad you liked the story - yes, unpredictability is the the key to suspense.
@ Hemant - You had no clue till the end? Thanks. That is a compliment that I have been able to maintain suspense.

Arvind Passey said...

Well, the way the story flowed through dialogue was fascinating. More interesting is the way a reader is prodded to do his/her own thinking. For instance, what if it is Rita concocting the story of her being with Sharma the entire night?

A story with riddles. A story riddled with uncertainties. A riddle that is given the form of a story. Whatever it is, I liked it.

Arvind Passey
www.passey.info

Unknown said...

Loved it!
I was guessing that Rita would turn the case around. And she did.You made her do it!

Great minds think alike :)

Good Luck!

O'S said...

What I liked best was the freight train of accusation that hit the guy at the end of the narrative, and that when he was expecting a foreign assignment... Lovely write-up and it was refreshing to read the story from the accused's point of view... usually it is from the detective's point of view...

Vikram Waman Karve said...

@ Arvind - Rita concocting a new angle - a riddle within a riddle...!!!
Thanks for your nice words. I am glad you liked the story.
Regards
Vikram

Vikram Waman Karve said...

Hi akanksha,
Oh yes, creative and imaginative mind thinks alike.
Thanks for your views. I am glad you liked the story.
Regards
Vikram

Vikram Waman Karve said...

Thanks Sandy. I loved your story - it is rally well narrated.

Unknown said...

Nice story :) Nicely written.. Nice concept, Vikram bhai !! Way to go

Debdatta Dasgupta said...

I have been a silent follower of your blog for sometime now (4-5months)... So, I must say, even though this is quite good, not your best.

Unknown said...

A very good take on the topic, simple straight forward and gripping. All the best fro Amdavadi tadka :)

Vikram Waman Karve said...

Hi Ghazala,
So nice to see you here - Amdavadi Tadka - you've relocated?
Thanks for your nice words. I am glad you liked the story.
Regards
Vikram

Vikram Waman Karve said...

@ Debdatta - Thanks for your feedback - I agree.

Vikram Waman Karve said...

@ Prashanth - Thanks for your motivation.

Anonymous said...

gripping it was! i dint know the subtext was hunter-becomes-hunted, and it makes so much more sense now. dialogue form is a nice touch. all the best Vikram :)

Anonymous said...

gripping it was! i dint know the subtext was hunter-becomes-hunted, and it makes so much more sense now. dialogue form is a nice touch. all the best Vikram :)

Anjali Garg said...

hats off sir! Such a gripping story, the characters came alive as I read!

sibi said...

You ensured excitement all along. Well written!

Vikram Waman Karve said...

@ Prasantk - yes, the hunter becomes the hunted - I like using dialogue rather than long descriptions and "reportage" - thanks a lot for your comments.

Vikram Waman Karve said...

@ sibi - I tried to keep the suspense going thorough the dialogue. I am glad you liked the story

Vikram Waman Karve said...

Hi Anjali,
I am glad you liked this story.
Thanks for the nice words.
Regards
Vikram

Vikram Waman Karve said...

Thanks for your comments and feedback, dear fellow bloggers.