TOOTHACHE : a story
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A Man had such a terrible toothache that he thought he was going to die because of the toothache.
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TOOTHACHE : a story
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A Man had such a terrible toothache that he thought he was going to die because of the toothache.
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SHORT FICTION by VIKRAM KARVE
REDEVELOPMENT
A STORY
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REDEVELOPMENT
Fiction Story
By
VIKRAM KARVE
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“I have decided to
give the bungalow for redevelopment…” his mother says.
“Re-development…?” he
asks – surprised.
“Yes – redevelopment
of our old bungalow into modern high-rise apartments – I discussed it with your
sister – she wants it too…” his mother says.
He looks at his
sister and smiles at her sarcastically.
“Oh – so this is why you
have come to Pune all the way from the US – after a gap of 3 years…” he says to
his sister.
“We were busy…” his
sister says.
“So busy that you
couldn’t come for father’s funeral last year…?” he says in an accusatory tone.
“I wanted to come –
but couldn’t – and you were here to do everything…” his sister says.
“Oh – Yes – I am
always here to do everything…” he says with sarcasm in his voice.
His mother looks at
him and speaks.
“Let’s talk about the
redevelopment of our bungalow…” his mother says to him.
“I am not interested
in redevelopment – I love living in this bungalow…” he says.
“But your sister
wants redevelopment…” his mother says to him.
“What has she got to
do with this…?” he says, “father had clearly said that this bungalow was mine…”
“No – but…” his sister
starts speaking.
He gestures for her
to be silent.
Then – he looks at
both his mother and his sister – and he speaks in a firm voice.
“10 years ago – in this
very room – father had said that this bungalow would be mine after he died – do
you remember…? I wanted to buy a flat near Baner – and move out to live independently
– but father said there was no need for me to buy a flat – that I should live
here and look after him and mother – and after his death – I would be the owner
of this bungalow…” he says to his mother and sister.
“That was 10 years
ago…” his sister says.
“So…? He gave me his
word. Doesn’t his word of honour have any significance to you…? In fact – knowing
that I would be living here permanently – I got the bungalow renovated – I built
two extra rooms – improved the terrace – beautified the garden – now – the bungalow
is in good condition – and – we are quite comfortable here – so – there is no
need to demolish this beautiful bungalow…” he says to his mother and sister.
“Those are your views
– we feel redevelopment is the best option – the builder is giving us a very
good deal too – one 3 BHK flat for each of us – and quite a nice amount of
money…” his mother says.
“What…? You have
already talked to a builder for redevelopment…? You didn’t even bother to tell
me…” he says – shocked.
“He had come here in
the afternoon – when you were at work – so – I am telling you now – the moment
you have come back from work…” his mother says.
“You should have
asked me before speaking to him…? And – did the builder land up here suddenly
on his own…? Someone must have spoken to him…” he says – curious – looking at
his mother and sister.
His sister speaks.
“My husband spoke to the
builder – he is a classmate of my husband…” his sister says.
“Oh – so it is your
husband who is the culprit – sitting in the US – and creating mischief here…” he
says to his sister – contemptuously.
“Don’t speak like
that about your brother-in-law – he is elder to you…” his mother says to him –
in a tone of admonishment.
“Then tell him to
mind his own business…” he says curtly – then he looks at his mother and sister
– and he says, “I am the owner of this bungalow now – and I have decided that
there is going to be no redevelopment – that is final…”
His sister looks at
him and speaks.
“You are not the owner
of this bungalow – this bungalow was originally built by our grandfather – so –
it is ancestral property – after father’s death – the bungalow belongs to all 3
of us – mother, you and me…” his sister says.
“But father clearly
promised me that he would be giving me this bungalow…” he says – assertively.
“Father is dead now…”
his sister says – matter-of-factly.
“I know he is dead – I
was the one who performed his last rites – but you didn’t even bother to come
for his funeral…” he says reproachfully to his sister.
Their mother
intervenes.
“Please stop arguing…”
his mother says to him, “that fact is that your father didn’t make a will – and
even if he did – you won’t be the sole owner of this bungalow since it is
ancestral property…”
“But he promised me –
in front of you – doesn’t his promise have any credence…?” he asks his mother
emphatically.
“We have to be
practical in these matters – we feel that redevelopment is the best option – we
are getting a good deal – so – we should go ahead…” his mother says to him.
“I am not interested
in redevelopment – I want to live this bungalow…” he says.
His sister looks at him
and speaks in a combative tone.
“What do you mean “I
want to live in this bungalow”…? You can’t always dictate terms and
bulldoze your way. I have an equal share – as much as you have – so you have to
listen to my views too…” his sister says insistently.
He looks at his sister
coldly and speaks.
“Oh – “equal share” –
okay – so – from now on – you look after mother…” he says to his sister.
“What do you mean…?”
his mother interjects.
“You keep out of this…”
he says to his mother sternly, “I am talking to her…” he says pointing to his
sister – then – he turns to his mother and says, “till now – I looked after you
and father – now – father is dead – and – and you say that his promise is dead
too – so – your daughter will look after you from now on…”
His sister is taken
aback.
“How can I look after
mother – I don’t live in Pune…” his sister says.
“Then – you relocate
to Pune and live here…” he says to his sister.
“I am an American
Citizen – I am happy living in the US – why should I relocate to Pune – I don’t
want to live in Pune…” the sister says.
“If you don’t want to
live in Pune – why do you want a house in Pune…?” he says to his sister.
“Why not…? It is my
right to have a share in my parents’ property…” the sister says.
“Yes – and it is your
responsibility to look after your parents too – I looked after them for the
last 10 years – now – it is your turn…” he says to his sister.
“My turn…? What do
you mean…?” the sister says.
“Well – rights and responsibilities go
together – if you have equal rights to your parents’ property – you have equal
responsibility of looking after them too – I have done my bit – I looked after
both father and mother for 10 years – now – only our mother is alive – so – it
is your responsibility to look after mother for an equal duration…” he says to
his sister.
“And you – what about
you…?” his sister asks him – questioningly.
“I am moving out of
the bungalow soon – so you can stay here and look after mother…” he says.
“Moving out…?
Where…?” his sister asks.
“That’s none of your
business…” he says rudely.
“What do you mean…?
How can you just go away like that…?” his sister says.
“Don’t worry about me
– you worry about doing your duty – rest assured – I’ll be back after 10 years
once your turn is over…” he says.
“I told you that I
can’t come and stay here in Pune for such a long time…” his sister says.
“Then – you can take
mother to America to live with you – anyway – that’s none of my business – it
is your prerogative how to look after mother…” he says firmly to his sister.
Then – he walks out
of the room – before his mother can react.
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He means what he says
– and – he walks his talk.
A few days later – he
moves out of the bungalow and relocates to another city – taking up a new job.
His mother pleads
with him to not to go – but doesn’t pay any heed to her entreaties.
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Meanwhile – his
sister has returned to the US – back to her husband and family.
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His mother keeps
beseeching him to come back to Pune – but it is of no use – he doesn’t come
back.
Then – a few months
later – he migrates overseas for better career prospects.
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So now – with her son
and daughter both abroad in foreign countries – the mother lives all alone in
the bungalow – lonely and desolate.
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And – the bungalow…?
Well – though his
mother and daughter are keen on redevelopment and building high-rise apartments
in place of the bungalow – the redevelopment cannot happen without his NOC – which
he consistently refuses.
He also makes it clear
to his sister that she is responsible for looking after their mother for the
next 10 years – when it will be his turn again – as per the “equal rights –
equal responsibility” hypothesis.
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Living in the US –
the sister can’t look after her old mother living in the bungalow in Pune – and
– taking her old mother to the US doesn’t seem practicable – and – neither is
her old mother inclined to relocate to America – so – the old mother leads a
lonely existence in the bungalow.
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The daughter does
whatever she can – remotely – from the US – to arrange caretakers for her old
mother – who is becoming infirm day by day.
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When the daughter realises
that her mother can’t live alone – she moves her mother to an “assisted living
facility” – and the bungalow lies unoccupied – locked up – uninhabited.
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Dear Reader:
I wonder what will
happen to the bungalow…?
Will the son come
back and live in the bungalow…?
Will the bungalow be
demolished and redeveloped into high-rise apartments…?
I really don’t know.
Let’s see what
happens.
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VIKRAM KARVE
SHORT
FICTION STORY
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“Tete-a-Tete” with a Pretty Techie Girl
Story
By
VIKRAM KARVE
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I love walking – and – I love talking.
That’s why no one wants to come for a walk with me.
“Oldie Goldies” of my age feel that I walk too much.
“Youngsters” feel that I talk too much.
That’s why I was pleasantly surprised when a pretty techie girl smiled
at me and asked me if she could join me in my evening walk.
“Hello Uncle…” she said, “can I walk with you…?”
“Of course…” I said, “I would love your company – come along…”
“Thank you…” she said – and – she started walking beside me.
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Dear Reader – after my retirement – I live in a modern residential
complex in a posh suburb of Pune.
It is a well-designed gated community – quite expansive – comprising of
a number of high-rise buildings – well laid out – in verdant environment – and with
good amenities – gym, swimming pool, sports facilities, walking and jogging
track lined with trees, soothing green lawns, a lovely garden, nice shopping
complex, basement parking et al. – located in beautiful spacious
environment.
Most of the residents are young “IT Software Techies” who work in the IT
Park nearby – young couples – Double Income Single Kid (DISK) – or – Double
Income No Kid (DINK) – who lead busy lives – and believe in maintaining a “hail-fellow-well-met”
type of relationship with fellow residents of the gated community.
The pretty techie girl who was walking with me – she was around 35 –
married to another “IT Techie” – they were a “DISK” couple.
I had seen her in the mornings – with her school-going son – waiting for
the school bus – along with other parents.
She lived in our building – or “Tower” as the builder had named it – and
– we met each other quite often – but – as I said – it was a “hail-fellow-well-met”
acquaintance.
Her name was Nisha.
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For some time – Nisha and Me – we walked in silence.
Then – Nisha spoke.
“Uncle – I wanted to talk to you…” she said.
“Okay – go ahead…” I said to her.
“It’s about your tweet about “quiet quitting” in relationships…” she
said.
“Oh – so you follow me on Twitter…” I said – feeling a bit elated.
“Yes, Uncle – and – I read your blogs too…” she said.
“So nice to hear this…” I said, “which blogs did you like…?”
“I read your blog on “How to Survive Incompatible Marriage” – and then –
I saw your tweet on “Quiet Quitting” in relationships – so – I thought you were
the best person I should talk to…” she said.
“Okay – I am all ears…” I said to her – guessing that she probably
wanted to talk about her marriage.
I was right.
She spoke about her marriage.
“It’s about my married life…” she said, “I am feeling suffocated…”
“Suffocated…?” I said to her – with a questioning look.
“Last evening – it was so bad – that – I was seriously thinking of
divorce – then – I remembered your blog “To Divorce or Not to Divorce” – I read
it again – I thought of all the stakeholders – I read your tweet on “Quiet
Quitting” – and – I thought it would be best to talk to you…” she said.
“So – you want to “quiet-quit” your marriage…?” I asked her.
“Yes…” she said, “I want to know exactly how to do it…”
“It’s simple…” I said, “reframe your marriage as a “job” – you know how to
do “quiet quitting” in a job – you put in the “bare minimum inescapable effort”
to keep your job – similarly – you do the minimum required to maintain your
marriage…”
She gave me a thoughtful look – maybe she was confused – trying to
digest what I had said.
So – I decided to help her out.
“Tell me – when did all this start – when did you start feeling
“suffocated” – as you put it…?” I asked her.
“It was always there – but it became worse during the COVID Lockdown –
my in-laws came to live with us – then “Work-From-Home” started – for both me
and my husband – and online school classes for my son – and – I had to bear the
whole burden – overload of “work from home” – they expected us to be on our
laptops 24/7 – and then – cook – clean – shop – do all the housework – cater to
the idiosyncrasies and never-ending demands of my in-laws – my son’s school
work – everything – it became too much for me – and now – it continues – my
in-laws have moved in with us permanently – I am totally stressed out and
suffocated…” she said.
“And – your husband – doesn’t he help…?” I asked her.
“He is in his own world…” she said – with a tinge of contempt in her
voice.
“So – you can be in your own world too…” I said to her.
She looked at me – confused – so – I decided to elaborate.
“Are both of you are still “working-from-home” – aren’t you…?” I asked
her.
“My husband works from home – I work “hybrid” – for 4 days a week – I
work from home – and one day – on Friday – I go to office…” she said.
“You must start going to office every day…” I said to her.
“Every Day…?” she exclaimed, “you want me to go to office every day…?”
“Will they object…?” I asked her.
“Object…? I don’t think so. In fact – my boss will be very happy…” she
said.
“So – start doing it – go to office every day – you don’t feel
suffocated at work – do you…?” I said to her.
“Not at all – I love my work – and the office environment…” she said.
“So – start going to office 5 days a week…” I said to her. Start working
from office – I have experienced that “out of sight – out of mind” does work…”
I said to her.
“But what will happen at home…?” she said – a bit anxious.
“Don’t worry – once you are not physically at home – things will take
care of themselves…” I said to her.
She looked a bit apprehensive – so – I assured her.
“Disentangle yourself – emotionally – that’s “quiet quitting” – you go
to office – things will work out at home on their own…” I said to her.
She smiled – she seemed to have accepted my suggestion.
I decided to change the topic a bit and ask her about her relationship
with her husband.
“You said that you were seriously considering divorce – is your
relationship with your husband that bad…?” I asked her.
“I don’t want to live with him – but divorce is a difficult decision for
me…” she said.
Observing the expression on her face – I could infer that she didn’t
want to talk about it in detail – so – I decided not to delve further – but keep
it simple.
I smiled to comfort her and spoke to her.
“If you don’t want to divorce your husband legally – you can divorce him
emotionally – that’s what “quiet quitting” is all about…” I said to her.
“Emotional Divorce…?” she said – curious.
“Yes – “Quiet Quitting” is akin to “Emotional Divorce” – sometimes –
when it is not be feasible to physically quit your marriage – it may be wise to
emotionally “quit” instead – so – “quiet-quit” your marriage – you emotionally
disentangle from your husband – you leave emotionally – instead of leaving
physically…” I said to her.
She looked at me – a contemplative look – as if she was seriously
thinking about what I had told her.
“You make so much sense…” she said to me, “and you think so differently –
well – I had never looked at marriage from this angle…”
“If you carefully observe – you will see that all married persons practice
“quiet quitting” – in varying degrees – at some time in the marriages – and
some have settled down to a “quiet-quitting” equilibrium” in the married life…”
I said to her.
“Like you…?” she said – with a smile.
“Maybe…” I said – smiling back at her, “I have just posted one tweet
about quiet quitting in relationships – the one you saw – now – I think I will
write a detailed blog on how to “quiet-quit” relationships – especially marriage…”
“Yes – you must write blog on “How to Quiet Quit Marriage” – it will
help so many who are in a similar situation as me…” she said to me.
“I will certainly do that…” I said to her, “and you think about what we
discussed – take your time – do what you think is best for you…”
“Of course, Uncle…” she said with a genuine smile, “thank you so much
for talking to me…”
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For some time – we walked in silence.
It was already dark.
Then – Nisha looked at her smartphone.
“I think it’s time for me to go home…” Nisha said – and – we smiled a “goodbye”
to each other – she walked towards our building – and – I walked towards my usual
bench in the park to do some meditation.
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ONE DAY LATER
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On the next day – as I started my evening walk – I saw Nisha coming towards
me – it seemed she was waiting for me – she looked happy and cheerful.
We started walking together.
“I must tell you something…” she said, excitedly.
“Good News…?” I said to her.
“Yes…” she said, “I am going to New Zealand…”
“New Zealand…!!!” I exclaimed.
“Normally – I refuse to go abroad to work on onsite projects – but –
this morning – I asked my boss if there was a foreign assignment – and – he
said there was one in Auckland, New Zealand – and I immediately volunteered to
go…” Nisha said, elatedly.
Nisha was so excited that she ran out of breath – so – she took a pause
before continuing to speak.
“My Boss was surprised – and so delighted too – he said I was the best
person for it – so – I am off to New Zealand for 6 months…” she said.
“Wow – 6 months…?” I exclaimed, “congratulations…”
“I must thank you…” she said to me.
“Thank me…? For what…?” I said to her.
“Last night – before going to sleep – I was thinking about the “quiet
quitting” concept you told me in the evening – and – I thought – wouldn’t
physical distance help me emotionally disentangle myself…?” she said.
“Long Distance Marriage – excellent – that’s taking “quiet quitting” to
another level...” I said to her.
“Yes – physical distance will make emotional detachment easier – “out of
sight – out of mind” – as you said…” she said.
“What about your son…? Will you take him to New Zealand with you…?” I
asked her.
“No – he will stay here – my husband and in-laws will look after him…”
she said.
“Oh – that’s good…” I said to her, “your son is big enough now – he is 9
– I had gone to boarding school when I was 9 – he will manage – but he will
miss you – since you are such a doting mother…” I said to her.
“You know – like my marriage – I am too involved with my son – I think
it is better for me to do a bit of “quiet quitting” on the parenting front
too…” she said.
I marveled at her ingenuity.
Indeed – she was taking “quiet quitting” to the next level.
VIKRAM KARVE
TEACHING STORY
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VALUE OF KNOWLEDGE
Teaching Story
By
The ”Guru” looked the man in the eye and said:
VIKRAM KARVE
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Short Fiction
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PARENTING
Story
By
VIKRAM KARVE
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PART 1
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She comes out of the College Principal’s
Office – she goes to her best friend’s room – and – she tells her friend the exciting
news.
“It’s a chance of a lifetime –
don’t refuse…” her friend says.
“But – what about my daughter – I
can’t take her with me…?” she says.
“Your daughter Nisha – she can
stay at your husband’s place…” her friend says.
“My husband’s place…? Why should
Nisha stay at my husband’s place…?” she says – taken aback by her friend’s
suggestion.
“Where else can she stay for 6
months…? There is no place in the hostel – there is a huge waiting list – and –
I don’t think she can manage living all alone in your flat – besides - it may not be safe for a young girl to live
all alone too – you know how the environment is nowadays…” her friend says, “I
would have kept her with me – but I live in a huge joint family – you know my
situation – so – I think keeping Nisha with your husband seems the only
option…”
“But – will my husband look after
her for six months…?” she says – looking skeptical.
“Why not…? He is her father…” her
friend says.
“But – he doesn’t know anything
about her – he hasn’t met Nisha for 5 years…” she says.
“That’s because you didn’t allow
him to meet her – your husband has visitation rights – but you told him that
you didn’t want him to meet your daughter…” her friend says, “I am surprised
how he agreed…?”
“That’s because I gave up
everything – no alimony – no maintenance – no child support – I didn’t take a
single rupee from him – not even my share in the house – nothing – absolutely
nothing – when I walked out – I took nothing from him – I just wanted my
daughter for myself – that’s all…” she said.
“It must have been painful for
him – for a father to be separated from his daughter who he loved so much…” her
friend says, “anyway – forget about the past – you call him and ask him…”
“Right now…? You want me to call
him right now…?” she says to her friend – feeling a bit uneasy.
“You told me that the Principal
wants your consent by closing hours today – so – it is better you call your
husband immediately and settle your daughter’s issue…” her friend says, “you
have your husband’s number – don’t you…?”
“I don’t know…” she says.
“What…? You don’t know…? Don’t
you ever call your husband…?” her friend says.
“I called him around 3 years ago
regarding some banking issue – I haven’t spoken to him after that…” she says.
“Look in your contacts…” her
friend says, “otherwise – we can find out from somewhere…”
She looks in her contact list on
her smartphone – and – she finds her husband’s number.
“It’s there – should I call him
now…?” she asks her friend.
“Yes – call him right now – if
you want – I’ll leave you alone…” her friend says.
“No. No. I want you to stay
here…” she says – and – she calls her husband.
She hears her husband’s voice on
the phone.
“Is everything okay…?” her
husband asks her – he is surprised that she has suddenly called him out of the
blue – and that too – after 3 years.
“Yes – all is well – how are you…?”
she asks her husband.
“I am fine…” her husband says,
“is there anything I can do for you…?”
“Actually – yes – I called you because
I wanted your help…” she says to her husband.
“You want my help…? How much…? I
will transfer it today – is it the same account…?” her husband asks.
“No. No…” she interrupts her
husband, “I don’t want your money – I want to you to look after Nisha…”
“You want me to look after
Nisha…?” her husband says, surprised and a bit confused.
“Yes – can you keep her with you for
6 months…?” she says to her husband.
“Six Months…?” her husband says,
flabbergasted.
Her husband is baffled – because
– when they split – she didn’t want him to meet their daughter – she said that
she didn’t want their daughter to come under his influence – he had meekly
accepted – after “hints” and “subtle threats” were given to him by her lawyer –
so – for 5 years – he had not met his daughter Nisha – and now – she wanted him
to look after Nisha for 6 months – it is all very confusing to him.
His thoughts are interrupted by
his wife’s voice.
“I have been selected for a
“Faculty Exchange Program” – I am going to New Zealand to teach at a prestigious
university over there for one semester – I can’t take Nisha with me – besides –
she can’t miss her college for 6 months – so – I thought it was best if she
could stay with you…” she says.
“Can’t you make some other
arrangements…? Maybe – in a hostel – or – you can hire a full-time maid…” he
says.
“There is no time for all that – there
is no place in the hostel – and – I don’t want her living all alone in the flat
– it’s not safe – Nisha is still a teenager – she’s just 19 – please let her
stay with you – after all – you are her father…” she says.
“Okay…” he says, “let me ask
Monika…”
“Monika…? Who is Monika…?” she
asks – surprised.
“She has moved in with me – we
are living together…” he says.
“A woman has moved in with you…?
Living together…? I didn’t know all this…” she says in a scandalized tone.
“You haven’t spoken to me for 3
years – you are happy with your career and life – you have moved on in life –
and you don’t seem to be interested in us getting back together – well – I have
to move on in life too – isn’t it…?” he says.
She remains silent – trying to
digest the fact that her husband is living with another woman.
Then – she remembers her urgency
– she has to confirm her consent to the Principal before closing time today –
she has a just few hours.
So – she pleads with her husband.
“About Nisha staying with you – please
tell me as quickly as possible – I will wait for your call – I have to give my
consent immediately – before closing hours today – and please say “Yes” and let
Nisha stay with you for 6 months – this is a life changing career opportunity
for me…” she says – with desperation in her voice, “if you want – I can come
there and speak to Monika – there is very little time – I am in a hurry – I
have to tell the Principal today itself…”
Her husband senses her
desperation.
So – he decides to say “Yes”.
“Okay – yes – Nisha can stay with
us for 6 months – you can give your consent right now to your College
Principal…” he says.
“But – you were going to ask
Monika…?” she says – a bit wary.
“I don’t want to disturb her at
work – but – you don’t worry about all that – I’ll tell her in the evening –
Nisha can stay with us…” he says.
“Thank you so much…” she says to
her husband – she says – feeling relieved.
Then – she hears her husband’s
voice on the phone.
“I hope Nisha has no issues staying
over here…” he says.
“No. No. I will convince her –
she has no choice – Nisha will stay with you – she is a good girl – she will
behave herself – she will be no trouble at all…” she says.
“You go ahead and give your
consent – and – let me know when you are going to New Zealand…” he says.
“Yes. Yes. I will go right now to
the Principal and give my consent – I think I’ll have to leave next week – they
said they would fast track the visa etc. – I will call you once my travel plans
are finalized…” she says.
“Keep me updated…” he says.
“Yes – and – thank you so much…”
she says.
“It’s okay – she is my daughter
too…” he says.
After the call is disconnected –
she puts the smartphone on the table – and – she smiles at her friend.
“He agreed…” she says to her
friend.
“I heard…” her friend says.
“There is a woman who has moved
in with him – some Monika…” she says to her friend.
“I heard…” her friend says.
“I’ll go to the Principal’s
Office and give my consent…” she says.
“Aren’t you going to tell
Nisha…?” her friend asks.
“I’ll tell her later…” she says.
“I think it’s better you tell her
now before you give your consent – you never know how teenagers will react…”
her friend says.
“Okay – I’ll speak to her at
lunchtime…” she says.
“No. You better speak to Nisha
right now. I will bring her from the classroom. You sit here and rehearse what
you are going to say to her…” her friend says.
Ten minutes later – her friend
arrives with Nisha.
“Congratulations…” her daughter Nisha
says to her – and she hugs her lovingly.
“You told her…?” she questions
her friend.
“Yes – and – I told her about the
other thing too…” her friend says.
“Don’t worry, Mamma – I will stay
with Papa…” Nisha says to her.
She feels relieved.
She thought it would be so
difficult to convince Nisha to stay at her father’s place – especially as he
has a new partner now.
But – Nisha seems to have agreed
so easily.
She wonders how her friend
managed to convince Nisha so easily.
She feels grateful to her friend.
Then – she wishes she could have
told her daughter herself.
While she is experiencing these
conflicting emotions – she hears her friend’s voice.
“Come on – go to the Principal’s
Office and give your consent – then – there will have to do the paperwork for
your visa etc.
________
In the evening – her husband and
Monika come to her flat.
She looks at her husband’s
live-in partner Monika.
Monika looks ordinary – very
ordinary – a podgy unpretentious looking homely woman – in short – she is a “Plain
Jane”.
She feels disappointed – her
husband could have chosen someone much better than this pedestrian woman.
The woman smiles at her – and
speaks very politely.
She wonders if it is genuine or
just fake courtesy.
Her thoughts are interrupted by
her husband’s voice.
“Call Nisha…” he says, “I want to
see her – and I want to her to meet Monika…”
“Yes…” she says to her husband –
and she calls Nisha from inside.
She wonders how her daughter will
react – meeting her father after five years – and – if Nisha will accept Monika
– her father’s girlfriend.
She observes that the three of
them – her daughter – her husband – and her husband’s girlfriend – they are decorous
to each other – cordial – but not very friendly.
A daughter meeting her father
after five years – it may take some time for the ice to melt.
But it seems Nisha has accepted
the situation.
They talk about Nisha’s college –
her routine – and – her husband and Monika says that they will be most happy to
have Nisha stay with them.
One week later – she is on her
way to New Zealand – with Nisha settled in her husband’s house.
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PART 2
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SIX MONTHS LATER
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She arrives from New Zealand six
months later – her flight arrived in the wee hours of the morning – she takes
the Airport cab from Mumbai reaches Pune – she asks the driver to drive via her
husband’s house – so – she can pick up her daughter Nisha and take her home.
It’s 8 AM in the morning when she
reaches her husband’s house.
Her husband, his girlfriend Monika
and her daughter Nisha are having breakfast.
“Come on, Nisha – finish your
breakfast quickly and go get your bag – the taxi is waiting outside…” she says
to her daughter Nisha.
“I am not coming with you…” Nisha
says.
“What do you mean “I am not
coming with you”…? I had told you to pack your bags and be ready – and I will
be picking you up in the morning on my way home…” she says to her daughter.
“I have decided to stay here…”
Nisha says.
“You have decided to stay here…?
What nonsense are you talking…?” she shouts at her daughter Nisha – then – she
gives her husband a questioning look and asks him, “what is all this…?”
Before her husband can answer –
Nisha interrupts.
“You don’t ask him…” her daughter
Nisha says to her, “it is my decision…”
“When did you decide…? I have
been talking to you every day from New Zealand – you never told me anything…”
she says to her daughter.
“I knew you would be very busy
focusing on your work – so – I didn’t want to upset you…” her daughter Nisha
says.
“You can’t decide these things –
I am your mother – you will have to come with me – get your things quickly –
the taxi is waiting…” she says to her daughter – emphatically.
“I am not coming with you – I am
staying here…” her daughter says – unequivocally.
“You have to come with me – you
have no choice…” she shouts at her daughter.
“I am an adult now – you can’t
dictate terms to me any longer – I will decide for myself – and – I have made
my choice – I want to live with my father…” Nisha says.
“But why…?” she asks her
daughter.
“I like it here – my father is such
a nice person – and Monika is so friendly – she is not a control freak – like
you…” Nisha says.
“Control Freak…? I love you so
much – I have given you the best of everything – I look after you so well – and
you are calling me a “control freak”…?” she says angrily to her daughter.
“You are so domineering – living
with you – I felt suffocated. Here – with Papa and Monika – I feel free…” Nisha
says.
She trembles with anger on
hearing her daughter’s words and raises her hand to slap her daughter – when
she hears her husband’s voice.
“Cool down – you go home now and
settle down – we will talk later…” her husband says.
“No – I am taking my daughter
with me right now…” she says assertively.
But her daughter Monika is
defiant.
“I am not coming with you – I
told you I want to stay here – and we are getting late – I have to go to
college – and – they have to go to work – to their offices – you please go…”
her daughter Nisha says firmly – and she goes inside.
She feels faint – the ground
slipping below her feet – and – she senses her husband’s hand on her arm –
supporting her.
“You go home and relax – we’ll
sort this out later…” her husband says.
She observes Monika looking into
her coffee mug – sipping coffee – as if she hasn’t seen anything – or heard
anything.
She feels shattered – overcome by
a sense of defeat – as her husband guides her out of the house towards the
waiting taxi.
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PART 3
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A FEW HOURS LATER
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She and her best friend – they
sit on a bench in a secluded place in the expansive university garden – and
they have a discussion – about her daughter, her husband, her marriage.
“Nisha called me a “control
freak”…” she says to her friend.
“It’s okay – you were too
attached to her – you tried to monopolize her – let her be – she is at a
difficult age – and she is an adult now…” her friend says.
“Monopolize…? I love her so much
– I wanted her to do well in life – and – as a single parent – I had to be
careful – so – I was a bit strict – that’s all…” she says.
“A child needs the love of both
parents – you deprived her of that – I feel you hastily walked out of your
marriage – you could have been less rigid…” her friend says.
“So – you are blaming me for
everything – you are saying it is my fault that my marriage broke up…” she says
– feeling hurt.
“Please try to understand me
correctly – I am not saying it is your fault that you and your husband split up
– but then – you could have been a bit accommodating – isn’t it…?” her friends
says.
“I could have been
“accommodating” …? What do you mean…?” she asks her friend.
“He told me you were too
dominating – you always imposed your will on him – and – he said he felt
suffocated in the marriage…” her friend says.
“My husband told you…? When did
he tell you all this…?” she asks – irked.
“After you two split – I met him
once at the airport – he seemed relieved that you had walked out on him…” her
friend says.
“You met my husband behind my
back…? And – you didn’t bother to tell me…?” she says – upset and extremely
annoyed with her friend.
“Was there any point…? You are so
headstrong…” her friend says.
“Headstrong…? How dare you call
me headstrong…? Just because I am gracious to you – that doesn’t give you the
license to say anything you want about me, make nasty comments and cast
aspersions about my personal life…” she shouts angrily at her friend, “Who the
hell do you think you are…? I will not tolerate such slander from lowlifes like
you – do you understand…?”
Her friend seems taken aback and
hurt by this outburst.
“I am sorry – I will not talk to
you again…” her friend says – and – her friend gets up and walks away.
__________
She sits on the bench in the
garden – all alone.
Her husband is gone – her
daughter is gone – her best friend is gone.
She has no one now.
Never before has she felt so
lonely – so alone.
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EPILOGUE
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While she sits in the park –
feeling depressed and lonely – her friend calls up Monika.
“You did well…” she says to
Monika, “Nisha seems very happy with you…”
“Yes…” Monika says, “how is her
mother…?”
“She is fretting and fuming all
alone – you don’t worry about her…” the friend says to Monika, “now that you
have her daughter Nisha on your side – you can go ahead with your plans – I
think he will agree…”
“Yes – I will try to convince him
– thank you so much – everything is working out so nicely – he loves me so much
– and – Nisha is such a friendly girl – she seems to have accepted me. You know
– that’s what he was afraid of – what would be his daughter’s reaction if he
got remarried…? So now that everything seems okay on that front – hopefully –
it will be wedding bells soon…” Monika says.
“Don’t forget to invite me for
your wedding…” the friend says.
“Of course – but – you listen –
your friend – Nisha’s mother – she shouldn’t know that you and me knew each
other – I think we need to keep our friendship under wraps for some time – at
least till the wedding…” her friend says to Monika.
“You don’t worry about her – she
has broken up with me – and – I am never going to speak to her again…” the
friend says.
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