"Do you remember the first fiction short story you wrote...?" a young friend, and a fan of my writing, asked me this evening.
"Of course I remember," I said, "it was a short story called RENDEZVOUS AT SUNRISE."
"I am sure it was about your first crush...your first romance," she said.
"Yes," I said, "How did you guess...?"
"I want to read it," she said, "why don't you post it on your blog."
"I have already..." I said.
"Why don't you post it once more..." she said.
So here is my first creative baby – a fiction short story written by me more than twenty years ago. It is a simple love story. I am sure you will love reading it.
RENDEZVOUS AT SUNRISE
By
VIKRAM KARVE
I stood at Dolphin’s Nose, a spur jutting out in to the
As the eastern sky started unfolding like crimson petals of a gigantic flower, I was overcome by a wave of romance and nostalgia – vivid memories, not diminished by the fact that almost ten years had passed.
I was a young bachelor then, and Vizag (Visakhapatnam
Every Sunday morning, I used to rise before dawn and head for Dolphin’s Nose to enjoy the resplendent spectacle of sun majestically rising out of the sea.
The fresh salty sea breeze was a panacea for all the effects of the hangover caused by Saturday night excesses.
The fresh salty sea breeze was a panacea for all the effects of the hangover caused by Saturday night excesses.
After the viewing the metamorphosis at sunrise, I used to walk downhill along the steep mountain-path towards the rocky beach for a brief swim.
I used to notice a flurry of activity at a distance, in the compound of a decrepit building, which I used to ignore, but curious, one day I decided to have a closer look.
I used to notice a flurry of activity at a distance, in the compound of a decrepit building, which I used to ignore, but curious, one day I decided to have a closer look.
It was a fish market.
Most of the customers were housewives from the nearby residential complexes who were in their “Sunday-worst” – sans make-up, slovenly dressed, face unwashed and unkempt hair – what a contrast from their carefully decked-up appearances at the club the previous evening.
I began to walk away, quite dejected, when I first saw her.
I stopped in my tracks.
She was a real beauty – tall, fair and freshly bathed, her long lustrous hair dancing on her shoulders.
I stopped in my tracks.
She was a real beauty – tall, fair and freshly bathed, her long lustrous hair dancing on her shoulders.
She had large expressive brown eyes and her sharp features were accentuated by the rays of the morning Sun.
I cannot begin to describe the sensation she evoked in me but it was the first time in my life that I felt my heart ache with intense yearning.
I cannot begin to describe the sensation she evoked in me but it was the first time in my life that I felt my heart ache with intense yearning.
I knew this was love.
But I knew in my heart that I stood no chance – she had a mangalsutra around her neck.
She was married – maybe happily too.
Nevertheless I went close to her and made her pretense of buying some fish.
Nevertheless I went close to her and made her pretense of buying some fish.
Smiling cannily at me she selected a couple of pomfrets and held them out to me.
I managed to briefly touch her soft hands – the feeling was electric and a shiver of thrill passed through me.
She communicated an unspoken good-bye with her teasing dancing eyes and briskly walked away.
I managed to briefly touch her soft hands – the feeling was electric and a shiver of thrill passed through me.
She communicated an unspoken good-bye with her teasing dancing eyes and briskly walked away.
I was too delightfully dazed to follow her.
I returned to my room and had fried pomfret for breakfast. Needless to say they were delicious.
I religiously followed this routine every Sunday morning.
She never missed her rendezvous with me – same place, same time, at precisely Seven o’clock in the morning.
She never missed her rendezvous with me – same place, same time, at precisely Seven o’clock in the morning.
But not a word was exchanged between us.
I was too shy and she probably wanted to keep it this way – a beautiful ethereal relationship – a love so delicate that one wrong move might destroy everything.
I was too shy and she probably wanted to keep it this way – a beautiful ethereal relationship – a love so delicate that one wrong move might destroy everything.
Meanwhile, I have developed a taste for fried pomfret – quite creditable, considering that I had never eaten fish before.
I left Vizag and traveled around the world, met so many beautiful girls in the numerous exotic places I visited, but I never forgot her.
A man’s first love always has an enduring place in his heart.
A man’s first love always has an enduring place in his heart.
And now I was back in Vizag almost ten years later.
As I walked down the slope towards the beach, in my mind’s eye I could still vividly visualize the playfully sublime look on her face - her gentle smile and communicative eyes – although ten years had passed.
I could not contain the mounting excitement and anticipation in me. I was desperately yearning to see her again. It was a forlorn hope but I was flushed with optimism.
As I walked down the slope towards the beach, in my mind’s eye I could still vividly visualize the playfully sublime look on her face - her gentle smile and communicative eyes – although ten years had passed.
I could not contain the mounting excitement and anticipation in me. I was desperately yearning to see her again. It was a forlorn hope but I was flushed with optimism.
As I reached the beach I noticed that the Sun was well clear of the horizon.
I glanced at my watch. It was almost Seven O’clock.
I hastened my step – almost broke in to a run – and reached the fish market and stood exactly at the same spot where we used to have our rendezvous at sunrise.
I glanced at my watch. It was almost Seven O’clock.
I hastened my step – almost broke in to a run – and reached the fish market and stood exactly at the same spot where we used to have our rendezvous at sunrise.
With tremors of anticipation, almost trepidation, I looked around with searching eyes.
Nothing had changed. The scene was exactly the same as I had left it ten years ago.
Only one thing was missing - she wasn’t there.
I had drawn a blank.
I was crestfallen.
Nothing had changed. The scene was exactly the same as I had left it ten years ago.
Only one thing was missing - she wasn’t there.
I had drawn a blank.
I was crestfallen.
My mind went blank and I was standing vacuously when suddenly I felt that familiar electrifying touch, the same shiver of thrill.
It shook me to reality, as quick as lighting.
She softly put two promfret fish in my hands.
It shook me to reality, as quick as lighting.
She softly put two promfret fish in my hands.
I was in seventh heaven.
I looked at her.
I was not disappointed.
Her beauty had enhanced with age.
But something had changed.
Her beauty had enhanced with age.
But something had changed.
Yes, it was in her eyes.
Her large brown eyes did not teasingly dance anymore.
Her large brown eyes did not teasingly dance anymore.
There was a trace of sadness, a tender poignancy in her liquid brown eyes as she bid me an unspoken goodbye.
I was so dumbstruck by the suddenness of the event, and the enormity of the moment, that I stood frozen, like a statue, unable to react or to say anything.
I was so dumbstruck by the suddenness of the event, and the enormity of the moment, that I stood frozen, like a statue, unable to react or to say anything.
It was only as she was leaving that I noticed that there was no mangalsutra around her slender neck.
VIKRAM KARVE
Copyright © Vikram Karve 2010
Vikram Karve has asserted his right under the Copyright, Designs and Patents Act 1988 to be identified as the author of this work.
VIKRAM KARVE educated at IIT Delhi, ITBHU and The Lawrence School Lovedale, is an Electronics and Communications Engineer by profession, a Human Resource Manager and Trainer by occupation, a Teacher by vocation, a Creative Writer by inclination and a Foodie by passion. An avid blogger, he has written a number of fiction short stories and creative non-fiction articles in magazines and journals for many years before the advent of blogging. His delicious foodie blogs have been compiled in a book "Appetite for a Stroll". Vikram lives in Pune with his family and pet Doberman girl Sherry, with whom he takes long walks thinking creative thoughts.
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5 posts in one day!!! :O how do u do it??
ReplyDeletebeautiful story!