tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4710313771389348282.post3302988398941033784..comments2024-03-27T20:32:32.879+05:30Comments on Academic and Creative Writing Journal Vikram Karve: THE GIFTVikram Waman Karvehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00290102473130246523noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4710313771389348282.post-15260667551634487162010-08-18T22:09:22.722+05:302010-08-18T22:09:22.722+05:30Dear Vikram,
You're welcome, and mine was onl...Dear Vikram,<br /><br />You're welcome, and mine was only a suggestion. Ultimately, the author knows what is right, and I'm only happy I can help.<br /><br />While editing and revising my drafts, I find it helps to not let language get in the way of communication. <br /><br />That is hard work, and my work currently under publication has gone through more than 25 drafts in some instances. I'm just a beginner writer, but I'm passionate about language and storytelling, and hope to learn.<br /><br />Thanks for following my blogs, and do chip in with your inputs whenever you find the time.<br /><br />Best,<br />DamyantiAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04283371140346602856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4710313771389348282.post-34451688397159868042010-08-18T21:32:42.761+05:302010-08-18T21:32:42.761+05:30Dear Damyanti,
Thanks a lot for your feedback - yo...Dear Damyanti,<br />Thanks a lot for your feedback - you are right - I must edit my writing - I must say you've made the sentence you edited quite crisp and taut.<br />Thank you once again.<br />I read and loved your blogs on writing and am going to be a regular visitor.<br />Do read my stories and comment. I will eagerly look forward to your feedback.<br />Regards<br />VikramVikram Waman Karvehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00290102473130246523noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4710313771389348282.post-14808012917690775842010-08-18T10:21:51.770+05:302010-08-18T10:21:51.770+05:30Hi, love your blog...didn't want to start with...Hi, love your blog...didn't want to start with feedback, but just thought would chime in since you've asked....the piece could do with a little editing, and here's a sample sentence to explain how:<br /><br /><br />I do not know how the idea entered my brain in the first place; but once conceived, it haunted me with such urgency that a strange force took charge of me, impelling me to act.<br /><br />I do not know how the idea struck me in the first place; but once it did, it took hold, and wouldn't let go. I had to act.<br /><br />Hope this helps, and keep writing! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04283371140346602856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4710313771389348282.post-36812743210881568932010-08-16T20:40:07.799+05:302010-08-16T20:40:07.799+05:30Thanks for the feedback, Yellamah RDThanks for the feedback, Yellamah RDVikram Waman Karvehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00290102473130246523noreply@blogger.com